398697809 发表于 2021-7-8 15:57   全显示 1楼
文笔挺好的，催眠的过程虽然有点公式化不过至少层层递进，比较真实。不像其他那些一句话就直接控制成奴隶的催眠文，那些太过容易反而没有代入感，看着就很假很出戏。
另外，我个人口味比较重，看见重口的标题，还以为是朱颜血级别的暗黑系催眠，结果目前看来就是很简单的NTR，期待后续的情节进一步展开，比如夫目前犯，或者把老师的老妈也一起弄来3P之类的，逐渐加重口味，来点夫妻奴之类的我都能承受，毕竟催眠文的优势就是能做到平时正常情况下无法想象的活儿。
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