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[离任作者] 【夫妻类】【良人演义】第二章、隔阂

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2010-2-14 13:36  显示全部帖子
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采用男女主角交替的视角描写，可以很细腻的刻画心理变化，楼主的文笔很好，但似乎感觉女主的变化快了点，应该有个过渡，比如和小李无意中发生触摸。呵呵

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