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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2011-6-2 09:11  显示全部帖子
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楼主一开始就展开了2条线索，好像彼此没有什么关联,除了那个“女人",看样子在一步一步的挖坑。整个故事有序的发展。期待更加曲折、刺激的情节展开。但是如果能增加H的心理活动的描写，就更棒了。

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