[离任作者] 【重生之母女调教】第五章

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1楼大中小发表于 2010-3-12 21:10 显示全部帖子

从第四章开始以为作者的文笔愈加的提高了，满心期待，没想到第五章又回来了~~总体感觉非常的粗糙，细节描写很不好，而且人物没有美感，所以就算调教起来也感觉不到什么趣味，希望作者能在艺术性上稍微在处理一下，这样会更动人

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[离任作者] 【重生之母女调教】 第五章

[离任作者] 【重生之母女调教】第五章